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Overall, I think it's good- a lot of nice perspectives in it. I would have definitely made it larger on the page though, since it's a large machine and you didn't really have a background. Even if you couldn't fit in the whole boom in every view. The only other thing besides that is detail. Keeping it simple is good, but without much detail it looks kind of like a toy still.Overall pretty good though- nice proportions, and looks very stable.
i think that your background is too distracting; dull it down to birng the yellow int he machine foward
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